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Part 2: Narrow Your Questions,
Shape Your Answers
In the last column we proposed a quick and easy way to approach a short
piece of writing ("The Five-Minute Miracle," January/February
2003 Newsletter). Briefly, you set up a conversation with your reader
in which you begin with your main message and then answer your reader's
probable questions about that message. Your main message will require
only the opening sentence or paragraph (from one to three sentences
in all). The bulk of your writing will consist of your answers to the
questions you think your readers would have. Now we must see how to
make those answers easy to write and useful to read.
Narrow Your Reader's Questions
The first step to easy answers is finding the right questions. The right
questions are the ones that tell the readers what they most want and
need to know. It is worth spending some time considering what questions
are most important, so as not to waste more time answering others that
lead you away from the main reasons for your report. For example, suppose
you are writing a progress report with the following main message:
Although phase one of the project was completed two months behind
schedule, we now have the data needed to begin phase two.
What do you think your reader's first question would be? The question
that immediately pops to mind might be, "Why were you so late finishing
phase one?"
That could be a large and difficult question to answer. It could lead
you into a litany of explanations, accusations, justifications, apologies,
and excuses for the delay that quickly fills up a full page. Is it really
the most valuable question? After all, neither you nor your reader will
benefit from an annotated list of all the obstacles that came between
you and the completion of phase one. If you start with that, you will
irritate the reader with all your self-justifying details while giving
your report a negative cast by drawing attention to all the things that
went wrong before.
Instead of going with the first question that occurs to you, stop to
ask yourself what your reader most wants to know. In this case it might
be, "When do you expect to complete the project (or, at least,
phase two)?" Answering that question first will tell the reader
what he or she wants to know right up front. It will give your report
a positive, forward-looking approach. Finally, it will leave room for
you to explain the reasons for the phase one delay further on, in one
or two sentences. Once you have shown that you are on a planned, positive
course, the reader will be more accepting of the previous problems that
now appear as history.
Structure Your Answers
The best structure for answering your reader's probable questions is
this:
Key Point + Backup
It gives the reader the answer immediately and then makes that answer
credible by bolstering it with an example, an illustration, or an explanation.
This approach does not come naturally. Our tendency seems to be the
reverse: Build up evidence and then present the conclusion. Although
this progression makes sense in science and logic, it doesn't work well
for business writing. Why not? Well, think of your own expectations
as a reader: Do you want to know the answer to your question at the
beginning or the end of the section?
To write effectively in business, we must remember to tell the reader
the answer first and then explain the reasoning behind it.
In the example, you would begin your answer with a clear statement of
when and how you hope to complete the project or its second phase. One
or at most two sentences should suffice. Then you would follow with
your reasons for this assertion.
Yes, in one sense this method is harder, because it forces you to make
clear, committed statements. That's what you look for in the writing
you receive, isn't it?
Try it, and, as always, please let us know how it works for you: perccom@aol.com.
Cheryl and Peter Reimold have been teaching communication skills
to engineers, scientists, and business people for 20 years. Their firm,
PERC Communications (+1 914 725 1024, perccom@aol.com),
offers businesses consulting and writing services, as well as customized
inhouse courses on writing, presentation skills, and on-the-job communication
skills. Visit their Web site at http://www.allaboutcommunication.com.
The article in the Career Section "Tools" is gratefully
reprinted with permission from the authors as well as permission from
the IEEE Professional Communication Society Newsletter Editor. This
article is reprinted from the May/June 2003 issue, Volume 47, Number
3, pages 10 & 14 of the IEEE PCS Newsletter.
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